Matt Bellamy

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In the UK at the moment, you have to opt-in if you want to donate your organs after death. However, some other countries have an opt-out system, where people are ...

This is a good start. I think it sounds a little abstract at the moment, and could perhaps do with being more specific - what, exactly, in terms of money, ...

Hello! I really like this, and I especially like the ending. I was a bit confused though, I thought the title was "art" because that's what's at the top, but ...

Hi! I liek your poem but I think it's a little vague. And it's good to leave your poem open to interpretation so that the reader can assume whatever they ...

Hello! I think the concept of this poem is something a lot of people will be able to relate to. However, I'm not sure I'm keen on the narrator talking ...

Wow, some of those pictures are pretty atmospheric. I do wonder how other countries cope with snow, considering England got about six inches this winter and the whole country seemed ...

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At first I thought this poem was about giving up and losing hope, but as it continued I thought it was more abou having hope despite things going wrong, because ...

Hello! This is quite interesting, and it's open to interpretation, which I like. The use of wonder sounds a bit repetitive in the first stanza and I don't like the ...

Hello! I think the rhyming you have used gets very repetitive in this poem, and then it comes as a bit of a shock for the reader when the final ...

This is beautiful, I love your imagery just as it is - you describe things very well. I like how you describe the wind, and the sky "pricked" with silver ...

This flows really well and I like the description you used, especially "sharp-edged and glittering". You need a question mark at the end of the second stanza, though. I like ...

I like how short this is, because you managed to still make it powerful. You kind of mixed two metaphors towards the end though - perhaps the wind could be ...

You describe the water very well here, and I would liek to think that this poem could be a metaphor for something deeper. I ahve no idea what this line ...